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| Open Poetry #43 |
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Love Falls |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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when love falls it is soft through cracks and crevices through sheets and pillows between hands it slips I am searching through dark rooms for the eyes that once held me I am losing in the silence, my heart it will beat without body to warm me without words to calm me I know past layers of dust slowly collecting on the words left unspoken love falls |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
I love this piece.. you express this well. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh mt gosh you are back yay!!! Lovely write! -Juju -Juju |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You are one of my favortives. I'm glad to see a post from you!  How you doing??"I know past layers of dust slowly collecting on the words left unspoken love falls" for me it's the words unspoken....  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sorry  back for another read |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful write, but this last phrase was exquisite: "I know past layers of dust slowly collecting on the words left unspoken love falls" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I feel its touch from afar in this poem |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
thank you everyone! It's great to be back. I think I feel my muse smiling  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
does that mean we get more from your pen?! you inspire me, you make me want to sit down and write. finding the time to is the trick  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's nice to read a lovely lady Canuck's words. Love can be that way for sure. Wonderful images evoked in this piece. Hope the oil damage out there doesn't bother you too much.....Ugly stuff isn't it? Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...enjoyed very much...James |
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VampireWifey New Member
since 2008-11-24
Posts 8Albany,NY |
i love great poem. very well written |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Don't let the past layers of dust collect my dear, shake it off and face life anew, there is always someone else just waiting for a lovely girl like you. Good luck. Lindsay |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
I don' know what I like best in it but I guess maybe: in the silence, my heart it will beat without body to warm me without words to calm me I'm kina new here and I've read some of your stuff and so far this 1 I can say it made me stop 4 a minute... T.C |
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