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YoungatHeart2
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since 2008-12-12
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0 posted 2008-12-16 06:27 PM


The Special One


you are not here.

early mornings…
hating the quiet and lonely minutes

monday mornings…
searching for my whipping boy

daily routines…
attempting  to fill my days

i had a great day…
missing the joy of sharing

what would you do…
longing for your  words of wisdom

did you hear the one…
knowing you would tell it better

i’ve heard that one before…
wanting  to hear it again and again

i pout for an empty audience…
looking for the planned ignoring

stop teasing me…
waiting for the soothing lol

yes,  5 times today…
expecting the nagging reminder

my best friend…
you are not here and you are loved




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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2008-12-16 09:14 PM


This is sad and lovely. Makes me sorta sad you know?

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-16 10:55 PM


"i pout for an empty audience…
looking for the planned ignoring"

...cool phrase...welcome to PiP

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-12-17 06:22 PM


YoungatHeart2 - I felt loniness when reading this. Nice write...

BC

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