Open Poetry #43 |
A Letter To Santa (rp) |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A Letter To Santa Dear Santa, this is little Bill and Christmas time is near I want to ask you Santa for a special gift this year My Daddy’s in the army and he had to go away I’d like for you to bring him home to us on Christmas Day I’ve tried to be so very good, so Santa you could see How much I want my Daddy back home here with Mom and me It makes me so sad Santa to see tears in Mommy’s eyes I know she misses Daddy too and that is why she cries If you could do this Santa it would make me very glad It would be the bestest Christmas that I have ever had I’ve been the very best I could but I’m a little boy And if you do this Santa I won’t ask you for a toy I know my Daddy had to go to fight an awful war But Santa, maybe you could ask them not to fight no more Then everybody’s Daddies could come home for Christmas day And they could all ride home with you upon your magic sleigh I miss my Daddy oh so much, while he is over seas I’m hoping dearest Santa that you’ll bring him to us please Keep all my other presents and the candy if you will Just bring my Daddy home to me, signed your friend little Bill |
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YoungatHeart2 Member
since 2008-12-12
Posts 81 |
respectfully, what a great Hallmark commercial this would be. very nice! ok to reply to a repost? |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is such a heart touching poem. I really like it. Very well written. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am quite sure there are many "little Bills" thinking exactly the same thing. Great rp, and very timely indeed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
sewasham - just loved this poem, has it all, and wish you well... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sewasham, Top accolades for your wonderful Xmas poem my friend, it really touches the heart strings. Thanks for sharing this for I enjoyed it immensely. Have a great Xmas. Lindsay |
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Hunter's Moon New Member
since 2008-12-17
Posts 3Virginia, USA |
A warm endearing write... Been there, done that |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks for all of the comments my friends. Merry Christmas to all of you. I hope we will all remember our troops this holiday season. Take care. Steve |
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