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Open Poetry #43

A girl named Inspiration

j Tomorrow
Junior Member

since 2008-08-31

Posts 14
Boston

0 posted 2008-12-15 11:24 PM

I'll put a ring on your finger
if you could promise to linger
and Bless me with creation
to satisfy my temptation
Help me define beauty
Let me grasp passion
Guide this silence
Bless me, my desire
never want to forget you
with only this hunger to satisfy
Guide the palette through
Render art for me to pacify
and I shall marry creativity
She will be my one
With musical precision
strokes perfectly done
My soul the canvas
Memory my medium
Only you can help me through
Life's apathetic tedium

Inspiration I NEED YOU

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2008-12-16 02:37 AM

I assume...and I hate to use that word...this is of your muse? Perhaps she is with you, for I felt the heartstrings pulling for you in this piece.

j Tomorrow
Junior Member

since 2008-08-31

Posts 14
Boston

2 posted 2008-12-18 07:29 AM

It is actually an embrace of my desire to be inspired. I wanted to personify creation by making inspiration my crush, albeit unrequited.
So to me it has nothing to do with a girl at all; but I always like when people can take it in a way that they can identify with.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2008-12-18 04:55 PM

j Tomorrow - inspiration is a good thing, you write of it well...

BC

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-12-18 10:46 PM

have we not all been where you have so ably described...well done & welcome to PiP...'tis a good place to come for inspiration

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