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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2008-12-14 01:13 PM


I only want the real and unreal,
four roses not more at my front door,
and the ribbons and bows of eternity
around and about the all/everything.

Not an outrageous request, not at all,
in the scope of time’s unlimited stretch
but I’m of a type destined to die
and not ever to be as I once was.  

It’s the now ‘me’ who wants everything/all
but the less for sure can fill up my space
and lounge in a chair, drink, eat, be merry,
and flow like the wind in and then out.

And the one who is now destined to die
most grateful indeed for the less/lesser/least
for it’s known on the downhill there has to be
a pause in the middle for re-assessment.

But time lengthens the pause, extends the stops,
and makes the journey stretch till I’m dead
but really the roses, the real and unreal,
can stand at my door for a moment or more …
if not for the idle, the lethargic and lazy,
true essential essence of man.  

‘tis the spirit, you see, unwilling to be
a dictator to self and a delivery man
but I won’t open doors to anything less
in the time of these times I’m privileged to live.

But call out my name without any sound,
three times, three times, to make it seem loud
and wait, just wait, wait till I know
the all/everything has its ribbons and bows!

Helen / 14 December 2008



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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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1 posted 2008-12-14 11:25 PM


Honeybunch - ribbons and bows will arrive at your front door. Nice write...

BC

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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2 posted 2008-12-17 11:54 AM


Beautiful write.  One should never settle...
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3 posted 2008-12-26 08:51 PM


Helen,

This is not the first time that I have read this poem.  I keep coming back to it.  Your thoughts reach out and touch at me.

Alison

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