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Clouded Hope (Revised)
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Clouded Hope (Revised) |
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Freely_expressing Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69NSW, Australia |
Wintry Wind twirls in the sky With a skirt of swirling leaves Grey-bearded Cloud lumbers beside Tears falling as he grieves He mourns the loss of Sunshine’s light Among his once light step From his dark path, those rays take flight With a glorious pirouette Wind carries his tears to land Upon dry, barren ground Parched Ground extends a thankful hand New life will soon abound Soon sorrow’s load is lightened Cloud lifts his weary head The day begins to brighten Lady Wind returns to bed Old Man Cloud, now white as snow Smiles joyfully back at Sun Ground flourishes down below New life has just begun Rainbow leaps over Cloud’s head With spectacular flair From violet all the way to red Shining heavenly stairs Cloud does not wear silver clothes And often turns to dark So even when Lady Wind blows Remember Rainbow’s arc |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely DELIGHTFUL! A joy to read, thank you for this! Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Freely_expressing Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69NSW, Australia |
Margherita, thank you so much  So glad you enjoyed it as this style of personifying is relatively new to me Thanks again so much for your words of encouragement, they are much appreciated - Ben |
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