Open Poetry #43 |
Moon In Spill |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Moon In Spill ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~September moon On the rise this very night Trying diligently, to get it right Dripping soft rays all over the sky Wondering the very question of why Does this happen so rarely you say? Not repeating, forever and a day The way things come and go Shhh Luna, I know~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Marge What an absolute, delightful surprise to come in and see you at the top of the page. It's like seeing a Christmas present to unwrap, knowing the beauty that lies within. How are you, darling one. You are so missed and this poem is so beautiful, like you. It's beautiful. Love, Alison |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SO Beautiful Marge!! I've MISSED you!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
No need to know just observe and feel blessed as you are |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
So good to see you posting again and such a gorgeous poem! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful poem, and so very nice to read you again dear poetess. Welcome home, and happy holidays. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a relief to see you on here, Marge. Yesterday morning we were looking at the full moon, and I was thinking of all the beautiful poetic pictures you'd posted. Praying you're steadily improving healthwise, Marge. God bless, Rae |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Our Moon Goddess is baaack!!! ~ and what a lunar treasure it be! Words cannot express how truly happy I am to see you posting again. Your pip family has missed you oodles of strudels! With much love and healing hugs, Earthy One |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
The one and only Luna Lady. How much I have missed you. Dear, sweet friend, I do hope you are back home and feeling on top of your game. hugs and loves, Marti |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A PIP member can never look at a full moon without thinking of Marge. You have done it again. So good to see you here. Love to you, "late" |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
How wonderful to see something from you. Betty |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
I can't tell you how many little joyful butterflies were dancing all around inside of me when I saw this! Oh, Marge, I'm so glad to see this wonderful poem. Thank you. Love, Barb |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Yay! -Juju |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge, I am overjoyed to see a post from you!!! I do hope you are on the mend and feeling better. It's been a long hard road but I know you are one tough cookie. With much love and many fond memories, Nancy |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Marge, This is a good poem in a nice moony shape. Love Bobby |
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Vestibular Bard Member
since 2008-12-11
Posts 284New York |
Pleasingly metrical, While exquisitely symmetrical. Your lunar beguiling, Has left me smiling. Whatever malady, In you has bathed… Your lovely muse, remains unscathed. Thank-you for sharing your gifts... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome back to the blue pages, dearest Marge, moon goddess! Your moon poems are always a pure delight for the eyes and for the spirit, and this one is no exception. So beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely to see you here Marge. Beautiful as always. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Saw the moon last night and thought of you~~ as beautiful a write as ever. Wonderful to read your words, Marge. Hope all is on the mend. M |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
She was shining just for you Marge, because she knew you would write something beautiful about her. Glad to see you writing dear, Muys is asking for you almost every day. I'll write to you soon. Sending you healing Dutch hugs and knuffels. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Marge, it is grand to see your moon rising once again ... here ... above the cybersea! a most finely shaped 'write'! |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge: I am so happy and blessed to see you back at Pip. I have been worried sick about you. I am glad your back and am praying for a complete recovery that kept you from us all here. The poem is beautiful and I am so happy now that I know you are alright. Love you always Hugs Kimberly |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
glad to see you feeling better and back here with us |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love the construct of this, its content, and its existential qualities--top shelf write...lovely |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Marge I echo Alison's thought with this on my dear, written in your usual wonderful way. Take care, love Lindsay |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: An intriguing write! I love your moon poems particularly! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's a comfort to find you here again. and a |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know whenever there is a full moon here we actually DO call them Marge moons! Good to see your up to posting a little something. You take care and get better. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Dear Marge, thanks for this write, amd like every other one, it speaks to my heart all the time. I can almost feel the tone of your voice in this poetry....like the gentle rays of the pure white luna...with much warmth. Happy Holidays |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You know ... I sat here and wrote out 22 danged THANKee's ... then the Cyber-critters got obnoxious and decided to wipe out my carefully thought out replies~ DANG IT !! So one BIG THANK YOU ALL Love you ALL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Marge 'Luna' always seems so much more interesting when you verse about her! An enjoyable poem to read! It's good to see you back in PiP! Love Verbena xo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Christmas came early! *S* What joy it is to see you posting! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Marge, one big thanks is always a great gift! Hoping your holidays bring joy and peace. |
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Vestibular Bard Member
since 2008-12-11
Posts 284New York |
”You know ... I sat here and wrote out 22 danged THANKee's ... then the Cyber-critters got obnoxious and decided to wipe out my carefully thought out replies~ DANG IT !!” There once lived a poet named Marge, Her thanks, cyber-critters, discharged… She was heard to harangue, A very loud; ‘Dang!’ And instead, posted ‘thank you’, writ large. |
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