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| Open Poetry #43 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A beautiful woman Passes by— Wrong hair Wrong eyes . |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Needs a consultant...lol! Thought provoking! Eric |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I wonder if her hair and eyes are her own. Who knows any more? |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, Picky, picky, picky. Bobby |
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Vestibular Bard Member
since 2008-12-11
Posts 284New York |
I hate it when that happens... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
how can it be so wrong when it seems so right...nice... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Hey...if you don't look you'll never find what you're lookin' for!!  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nothing wrong with your hair that I can see. Maybe you can fix your eyes? I really like the succint way you wrote this poem. Nicely done! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When the heart has eyes for only one, everyone else is wrong... Enjoyed! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Huan Yi - just think when the one with the right hair, and right eyes pass by... BC |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all, yet suthern is the one that got it right . . . Thanks again John . |
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