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Up on Heartbreak Hill
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Up on Heartbreak Hill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Up on Heartbreak Hill Strangely enough there's no remainder of the willow tree we hid under to protect us from the rainstorm and the thunder that lit up that dreary night, that cold heartbreaking night. Still she knew that she was right to tell me of her love for Bill that night and as truth became revealed, I felt the pain a broken heart feels up on Heartbreak Hill. JamesLee 09December 2008 Not an actual experience, but never the less a sad experience is brought to memory upon this date. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You tell the story well, James. Glad it didn't happen to you. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, first of all, dear James, please never again hide under a tree during a storm and lightning! Good that you both survived that sad moment and could experience love again. Beautiful, in its melancholy! Love, Margherita  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes it is sad when we lose a loved one James but i enjoyed your post. Take care my friend and have a good day. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
well phrased...hard to believe that you didn't experience it...so well told |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JamesMichael - it does feel like this for sure. Nice write... BC |
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