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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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knowing now, the distant thunder of your storms and how you laugh when they are on your skin like the eyes of a lover touching I leave my leather at your windows brim and offer only my tattoos to be your gown as our music is the convulsion of trees and the sigh sky seamery of tides at hem of another voyeur horizon's dawn without forgivness but still worshiping and then there is moisture in your voice and you reach for my beard umbrella just momentary before the rivers bleed and our pale sands are dark earth love _____________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"knowing now, the distant thunder of your storms and how you laugh when they are on your skin like the eyes of a lover touching I leave my leather at your windows brim and offer only my tattoos to be your gown" ahhhha you do have a way mister  loved this  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*thud* Have mercy DarkDaddy...... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have such a way with words...do you mind if I am genuinely envious? (would have to quote the entire work to show all the parts I loved--excellent) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thank you babe.. ___________ ms gs..don't hurt the goodies..thanks babe _________________ steavenr, humble thanks guy, I do appreciate your reviews |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I always save your poem as my last for the night. It's like waiting for desert so it is not gone too soon. It's like waiting and savoring the pleasure that will come from something anticipated. It's like a goodnight story that floats in my head as dreams. That's what it is like to me. Goodnight, A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san good morning ms..and thank you for your night time reads |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: It's like surfing upon your words and growing wings to fly and feel the emotions of a "dark earth love" from above ... Dear Poet, you are so special! Love, Margherita |
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