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Lost In Forgotten Space
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Lost In Forgotten Space |
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L.L.Y.N.B.H <3 New Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 4AZ |
The world stopped when I first laid my eyes upon you. It was begging me to forget the few. Take a moment and feel something brand new. I find myself, thinking of you Wondering what I am meant to do. With every hug I listen to your heartbeat quicken, Thinking if this love is mine to take for mistaken. I'm Lost in Forgotten Space. Your face shows the pain lingering in mid air. You see the pain in my eyes, the true despair. It's not pain, yet deep inside I burn. When will you tell me how you feel? When is it your turn? I feel the love in your sweet warm embrace, nothing could ever be the same, if I could not see your face. I'm lost in Forgotten Space. Could we ever be? Could we run away... Just you and me? Find that place where all but love is lost. The place where no action has a cost. Where I can finally forget, I'm lost in Forgotten Space. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is such a heart-felt, hopeful longing here...should you ever find this place you describe in these lines, let me know "Could we run away... Just you and me? Find that place where all but love is lost. The place where no action has a cost." ...and, let me welcome you to PiP |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Welcome, my friend. Juju -Juju |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'Lost' is never a very warm comfortable place, especially where love is concerned. Welcome to Pips! |
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