A dream of serenity for Ms. 'Serenity B.'

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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-12-05 11:07 PM

             Dreamwalker Way

Leave behind the world of noise,
phantom hopes, and empty promises.
Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit
and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest.
Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by
in the last lovely light of a lingering sunset.
Relinquish all fears and cares…
as vanishing time-echoes in the cosmic
   void.

           --- b. e. adams  [big-time fool, small-
                                     time ‘poet’ (12/5/08)]

[a 'Universalist' honoring of a candlelit request!]

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2008-12-05 11:22 PM

that was just stunning!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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2 posted 2008-12-06 12:10 PM

And you are a lovely, lovely man!

Thank you m'friend.

Written in diamond dust!

(Yes, smile, I went off googling)

smiling wide

a beautiful way to end my night.

I thank you.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

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Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-12-06 12:48 PM

A wonderful poet's beautiful poem for a most deserving fellow poet!

- Owl

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2008-12-06 12:49 PM

"Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by"

Yanno, I can actually see her doing just that! You've perfectly captured her, poet.

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-12-06 01:04 AM

Yep, you did good. Most beautiful and most Serenity B. So, please don't go.

xoxoxo
Alison

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-12-06 01:56 AM

Lovely tribute to a fine lady, Bruce.
Ida

Margherita
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Eternity

7 posted 2008-12-06 02:47 AM

Wow, Bruce, this is totally awesome for our dear Karen!

You are inspired and inspire, Poet!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

8 posted 2008-12-06 04:48 AM

Hi Bruce, this is quite beautiful...A quiet reading offered me suggestive deep images...enjoyed it very much.

yann

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

9 posted 2008-12-06 08:56 AM

Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by
in the last lovely light of a lingering sunset.

looking for that cloud to lean on~~
lovely writing, Bruce

M

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2008-12-06 09:41 AM

bruce
this is beautiful for karen

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2008-12-06 11:28 AM

Beautiful tribute to a most beautiful woman of many sides. The below lines are pure gold thought.
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Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit
and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest.
Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by
in the last lovely light of a lingering sunset
-----------------------------------------

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2008-12-06 12:37 PM

Just so "Karanity." Funny, I don't have dreams of Serenity, I have nightmares!

Just kidding! Lovely tribute to a beautiful lady and friend.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

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13 posted 2008-12-06 02:53 PM

such a surreal aspect to this...again, another gem

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

14 posted 2008-12-06 02:54 PM

Great words! Easy to float on.....

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

15 posted 2008-12-08 05:13 AM

Dear Bruce... I see you are still gifting us my friend... this is so very beautiful!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

16 posted 2008-12-08 10:49 AM

Each line is a piece of poetic perfection.
I especially adored the follow:
"Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit
and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest."

An especially spiritual poem of serenity for our Serene One.

Linda

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

17 posted 2008-12-08 10:50 AM

"Follow the dreamwalker way of ‘spirit
and heart’ into the deep Autumn forest.
Lean on a cloud, and watch the rocks roll by"

Wonderfully creative!

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

18 posted 2008-12-08 11:41 AM

lovely.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

19 posted 2008-12-11 04:15 PM

Absolutely beautiful! *S* We all benefit from this gift to serenity! *S*

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