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| Open Poetry #43 |
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Bad Lands Romance |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Wild word songs whisper Moon orange dances into place Curves of fingers...restless Grace gentle, then cradle my face A twist toward lips attraction I feel breath of nestled time Prairie essence lingers onward Your hand spreads and clutches mine Quivered heartstrings echo Through valley's grassy evermore Clouded star stream's seance Mists the moment of implore On this eve of our beginning Crossing out our ancient stains We linger ever hopeful And start to taste the rain |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Enjoyed this romantic write greatly. Wonderfully written. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my favorite place for passion is the wild side of the badlands enjoyed this one ms |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This flows from beginning to end in a crafted piece of verse. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the last quatrain. Way to leave me tasting the poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
A gentle, sensual, evocative poem. Lovely... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is a great poem my friend You wrote it well. Lindsay |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Thanks so much for all your kind comments. I enjoy the works of each and every one of you |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is so beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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snoman New Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 7 |
there's nothing quite like the cradling of a face whether you be cradled or are the cradle-er. it sparked a vivid memory and image that surprised me in its strength, and that's why we do this, no? thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
amusemi - enjoyed reading this, much said in your words... BC |
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