Open Poetry #43 |
From amusemi...I would like to introduce my son |
twisted poet New Member
since 2008-07-22
Posts 5i forgot |
My son and I wrote and posted this poem when he was eight...it is his first poem from 6 years ago. Now he has it in his library, too. Enjoy your new home Brice...Mom The Whale Poem I am a whale Who lives in the sea I'm really big But rare to see I'm grey outside Eat tons of fish I don't like sharks My tail goes swish Dolphins are my friends They're mammals, too We swim all day In the sea of blue |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome, dear Brice! This is a truly delightful poem. I will look out for more, because I know from this first one that I will like everything coming from your pen. Very beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello and welcome to our pages blue!! This is a wonderful poem !! I can't wait to read more of you! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear Brice, Welcome to Passions! How kind of your mother to introduce you to the blue pages. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Welcome to PiP!! I'll look forward to seeing more of your poetry ~Sheli~ It's psychosomatic. You need a lobotomy. I'll get a saw |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Welcome to PIP Brice You have made a great start. Lindsay |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Welcome Brice...show us some teenage fun and angst! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Brice! You are quite the delightfully "twisted poet"! Welcome aboard the PiP Ship! I hope you enjoy sailing these blue pages! PiP, PiP, Ahoy!, there matey! Your poem is a deep sea treasure! Earth Angel |
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