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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
In silence my lips have been drawing the shapes Of phrases, so vague and deprived of a meaning. My dreams are about to find an escape To where the end always meets the beginning. My black and white fears have got an excuse: I still have the world - in my heart and around. I'm no longer free - I have something to lose. The more I deny that my freedom has bounds, The better I see them, the more my heart frets - The twilight has failed to appease me somehow. I'll lose it all soon, but I'll never regret. My lips keep repeating: "Not me, just not now". |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"My dreams are about to find an escape To where the end always meets the beginning." Hopefully this means the 'good' dreams will come full circle! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I love the way you start this...it is a very powerful write that you finish up very nicely (a lot of good content throughout, too) |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Powerful write...hope all is well. kat  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is interesting. I keep reading it because I really like how the words flow and the thought behind them. A |
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