Open Poetry #43 |
It will all pass... |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Like a drunk philosopher I'm out of cheap wine and friends Tonight will be rough again drowning in pain and envy How far this road appears so When there's a place I long for I wonder if next time love Will out-weigh the sacrifice Even in such strong longing With no way to reach out Because my words lack meaning I reject my fate as so Best not to be THE victim The vultures will be out again to collect the carrion -Juju |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesome, dear Juju!! It will eventually pass yes ... but how appropriate your words feel ... This is refined poetry! And ... never doubt the meaning of your words! Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Juju... I wish you love and sunshine and smiles for your day... lovely gifting here... thanks for sharing with us ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh! Excellent ending---Impressive. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I haven't seen your poetry in a long time Juju! It's been Missed! ARCTIC WIND |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
There's always strength in the vices, the weaknesses... |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow! Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry!! -Juju |
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