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Open Poetry #43

Spinning Shadow Memories

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2008-12-03 08:44 PM

Winds blow sweeping
clean my garden's paths
as seasons flow,
one passing fore the next,
writ as text
of each life cached
with dust's debris in time,
keeping synchronicity,
honoring its rhyme.

©2008 by icebox

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-12-03 11:17 PM

nice write, but sad (for me, at least) in that it reminds me that the only thing that clears my walks is the wind that blows upon them...you seemed to have caught it in your hands

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-12-04 08:03 AM

Very beautifully melancholic write, dear Charly.

Love,
Margherita

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2008-12-04 09:30 AM

I likez it, monsieur Icebox! You never fail to impress.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-12-04 12:28 PM

Most impressive write, Mr. Ice. Melancholy,
perhaps, but sadness has it's own cleansing qualities. (like the wind)
Ida

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2008-12-04 06:15 PM

You just...know things.

SpheresOvIce
New Member

since 2008-12-04

Posts 7

6 posted 2008-12-04 06:16 PM

Nicely done.

Ray,
A name, yet who is Ray?

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2008-12-04 07:45 PM

"writ as text
of each life cached"
Powerful wording, dear poet friend.

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