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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-11-30 10:28 PM



No, is


conversation in canter
of blade loops touché
in rational of my gender
it can all be so cutting edge
is the strongest part the point
or a thread in a ribbon’s structure
green grown on the ground under foot
no, is
a negative in any degree
none, zero, not, never, no

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love"  Anne Rice



© Copyright 2008 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
viking_metal
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1 posted 2008-11-30 10:46 PM


Good.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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2 posted 2008-11-30 11:16 PM


You just show them you are not just another pretty face - no can do - can be undone.

Loved these lines:
is the strongest part the point
or a thread in a ribbon’s structure
green grown on the ground under foot

I have literally had days where you could blow me over with a feather Helen, hang in there.

steavenr
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3 posted 2008-12-01 12:41 PM


so many ways to say 'no'...so well said
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-12-01 04:27 AM


YES, I do like this sweet Helen   well said indeed .......  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shortsleeves
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5 posted 2008-12-01 09:16 AM


Well said Helen.
Thanks,
Hal

Oklahoma Rose
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6 posted 2008-12-01 05:11 PM


Very well said, Helen.
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