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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-11-29 06:39 PM






Like snowflakes
dressed in unique beauty
that fall upon my face
and melt to my touch of warmth,
your words trickle into my heart
as a multitude of impulses of love
that incessantly revive
the rhythm of my river of life.



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Alison
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1 posted 2008-11-29 08:18 PM


Dear Margherita,

This is so very lovely.  It reminds me of one of my favorite Christmas sites.  Let me see if I can find it.  It is a place to make snowflakes and enjoy the snowflakes made by others all around the world. I'll put the link in the Announcement section when I find it.

Changed my mind - here's the link for you, dear lady:
http://www.popularfront.com/snowdays/

Your poetry makes me feel at peace.

Love,
Alison

[This message has been edited by Alison (11-29-2008 11:22 PM).]

Juju
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2 posted 2008-11-29 08:31 PM


I love that feeling

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-11-29 08:56 PM


Wonderful...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-11-29 08:59 PM


ah Margherita... this is very beautiful..  !!

love and snowflakes to you dear friend
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-11-29 09:53 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

Yes, it's almost that time of year.

This is a nice picture and poem combination.

Love Bobby

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2008-11-29 10:05 PM


..."that incessantly revive
the rhythm of my river of life."

Awesome finishing line!

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-11-30 04:54 AM


Hi Margharita, I have a talent for cutting beautiful, lacy snowflakes and I'm always teaching someone how to cut them or decorating cards etc. with them. This is such a beautiful poem I think I will read it to the next class I teach in the art of cutting snowflakes.
                              Ida

Margherita
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8 posted 2008-11-30 08:13 AM


Dear Alison, thank you! You made my day with that site, besides the ones I sent to you I sent one each to Simon and Milo, my sweet little grandsons and told my daughter to let Simon make some too. Wow, the whole world dances with those snowflakes!

Thank you so much, dear Juju, for enjoying the feeling.

Dear James, Aloha! Thank you, do you ever get snow there? I just asked google and found that it DOES snow on the high mountain peaks. Must be so beautiful!

Thank you, dear Roniece, I am in love with snow and have such wondrous memories where snowflakes play the main role! Tonight, in Rome, we had a white shower, but helas, not of snow, but of hail!!! It was terrible!

Thank you, dear Bobby! Yes, it's the first Sunday of Advent and snowflakes do fit, don't they?

Thank you, dear Kathleen! Always a joy when you visit and leave your loving comments.

Thank you so much, dear Ida! I would so love to sit with you and learn from you this art! I am honored that you consider reading this little poem when you keep your next lesson! Thank you!

Love and enjoy your Sunday, all!
Margherita


Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-11-30 12:28 PM


My little Darling Dolphina, you have a unique and wondrous way of experiencing the world around you ~ and within you ~ and then sharing it with others through your glorious poetry!


Linda Angelo Terrestre

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10 posted 2008-11-30 12:28 PM


i can almost feel the tinkle in my face from the snow...thanks for sharing
shortsleeves
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11 posted 2008-11-30 12:34 PM


Such beautiful expression only comes from love.
Thank you Margherita.
Love,
Hal

kudanesh
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12 posted 2008-11-30 12:43 PM


Hello again its been some time for me and it is  great to see you work again, lovely wright to come back to. thank you.

(p.s)  I love the fact there is a spell checker now.  

rhia_5779
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13 posted 2008-11-30 12:48 PM


Wow this is beautiful! Its so beautifully worded!
I speak italian too.. kinda.. I lived there for a while..
Your command of the language seemed fine to me.

Rick
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14 posted 2008-11-30 01:17 PM


Dear Margherita, beautiful words my friend, enjoyed the read,thank you.

Rick
  

Honeybunch
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15 posted 2008-11-30 03:12 PM


Yes, dear Margherita, I've got to agree with what Hal said.  Beautiful expression!  I could do with a few snowflakes here in South Africa at this time of the year but your kind I'd love all year round.  


Helen

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16 posted 2008-12-01 12:15 PM


"your words trickle into my heart
as a multitude of impulses of love"

nice touch...but, then, someone with a last name like mine would have a vested interest in the beauty of snow...love your work

Margherita
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17 posted 2008-12-01 10:35 AM


Dear Linda Angelo Terrestre, Dolphina always enjoys your replies so much! Thank you. You are a terrific Angel!

Dear FNG, thank you for the lovely comment, it is indeed a nice feeling!

Thank you, dear Hal, yes you are right with that supposition.

Thank you, dear kudanesh, for your kind reply, it's nice to see you again. Yes, the spellchecker is an advantage. 

Dear Rhia, grazie per la tua risposta gentile e il complimento. L'italiano è una lingua bellissima.

Dear Rick, thank you so much, you are always so kind. A true gentleman.

Thank you, dear Helen. I want the true snowflakes too. Nothing gives me more serenity … except the awareness of Love of course.

Dear Mr. Snow, thank you for your loving comment. I adore  my snow-memories!

Love,
Margherita

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