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| Open Poetry #43 |
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Rescued from A scene of terror |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Rescued from A scene of terror ==================================== Albeit forgiveness has never been put to test this far, still he can feel Bodhi is gaining lead very slowly. His feet, naked, at first cringe to move over splashes of blood and then cells, the nerves become numb, wise, indifferent. The particles of lives, now shattered, still warm and moving open rivulets of salted grief. Obsession with life is all he can feel while being rescued from a terror- scene, in his heart there is no desire. Look at the sun and undivided sky, all of a sudden nothing…nothing bears any meaning. © 2008 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar clever talks delay friendship! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Such a sad time in India. Take care,"late" |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Powerful, powerful write...my heart goes out to you. Glad to see you here. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear ((((Kushal)))), thank you dear Poet for this. Pure terror indeed! Your words say more than images ... We are witnessing things that should never ever enter human mind. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You paint the scene vividly, but with deep understanding and feeling. Wishing you peace and calm, my friend. Namaste. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have been watching the situation in India very closely in fact I have a friend that I talk to on another site who lives in Mumbai that I haven't been able to get in touch with and I am worried about her. I feel so sad for all the terror victims. Take care, Ku. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Poddarku, I have many old friends and business associates in Mumbai. The attack made me very sad. Mumbai is one of my favorite places. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ku... thank you for sharing this. it is a horrific situation.. I hope you are safe.. love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Poddarku, men are so cruel, how can they authorize themselves to kill people ? Thank you for the enlighting poem. yann |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kushal, You have moved me on many levels with the power of your poem. My heart goes out to you and your countrymen. Alison |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
sad -Juju |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Spending another moment of silence with you, embracing the world and projecting love to all involved. I think the perpetrators need love more than anything else, may their hearts open to love, so that they can release hatred. Love, my friend. Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I saw what is going on in India. I am so sorry. It is a very sad situation. You stay safe. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Very powerful poem! Its hard to comprehend how people could be that cruel and messed up that they would just kill so many like that with such brutality.. Its so sad |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The maiming, the deaths, and the destruction is all beyond human comprehension. Your descriptive, gut-wrenching depictions brought the terror closer than the news programs ever could. Love, Harmony, & Peace, Linda  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My heart froze and I think my breathing stopped too - and all that was moving were my tears down my cheeks throughout my reading of your sensitive depiction of "Man's inhumanity to Man", as Robert Burns put it - and the ache will resonate long after I have finished this response. Every single one of us has an obligation to humanity to do whatever we can - in whatever peaceful way we can - to make the world a happier and safer place. You are doing it, Kushal, by highlighting the plight of these people. In years to come, I know it will be your poem that will last far longer in my memory than the graphic reports on Television news. Thank you so very much for caring. And thank you for being safe. - Owl |
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