Open Poetry #43 |
Swept Aside |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And then at once I am The wind, Having swept aside Illusion’s form – And joined my spirit to the Breeze. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And then at once I am The wind, Having swept aside Illusion’s form – And joined my spirit to the Breeze. ... and they danced as one in the shower of stardust and blew away all residue of any passing clouds and they were at once the matter and the space ... and gazed into forever. You do inspire, dear Eric! Margherita |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
lovely picture in my mind~ |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
This seems like the verge of enlightenment. Thanks for posting it. poetry podcasts, blogs and photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Eric, may I say that it IS enlightenment? You couldn't say it if you didn't know it! Lovely! Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful Zen-esque imagery, Eric! You've left us with both 'breeze' and 'gale' with few words. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Pardon the pun, but this blows me away. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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