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vandana
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0 posted 2008-11-27 06:33 PM





Downs And Ups

There will be down and ups
In our life
Sometimes
It will be ups and downs
But don't worry
Everything will be alright
There will be time
When things will get right soon
Think of the future
The future is right ahead of you
Don't look upon past
As time runs fast
This is our right place
to be happy
This is our life
Life is short
So why not?
Enjoy your life
Don't worry about ups and downs
Downs and ups
there are choices to make
To take away
So let us make them right choices
In our life

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-11-27 06:40 PM


quote:
Don't look upon past
As time runs fast
This is our right place
to be happy
This is our life



This is beautiful and wise too, dear Vandana!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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2 posted 2008-11-27 06:54 PM


Nice! Vandana, it's so good to read you tonight.
Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2008-11-28 02:52 PM


Good advice for any situation.  Always enjoy reading your words.  
Tim
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4 posted 2008-11-28 06:05 PM


very nice, enjoyed.
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-11-29 10:44 AM


Enjoyed your wisdom, Vadana.
                          Ida

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-11-29 11:54 AM


so much solace with your poem...Thanks a lot.

yann

LindsayP
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7 posted 2008-11-29 07:29 PM



You have certainly got the right attitude
Vandana, look forward never backwards and make the most of what you have, great post.
take care.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-11-30 04:31 AM


Vandana, I do like your thoughts here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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9 posted 2008-12-02 02:19 AM


vandana,

I like the message in your poem.

Alison

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10 posted 2008-12-02 09:55 AM


Excellent advice! *S* I enjoyed this very much. *S*
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11 posted 2008-12-02 02:32 PM


roseannavandana ~

I loved this! Yes, there are ups and downs in life, however, I prefer the ups by far! lol

Delightfully positive piece of poetry!

Love to you, sweet poetess!

Linda Lou

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12 posted 2008-12-02 05:06 PM


A wonderful message of contrast. Thanks Vandana.
Hal

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