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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wrinkled and old she turns to God to offer, at last, her worn-out soul. As her own past deeds fade in her mind, she is quick to judge others and is not always kind. She has found her truth but the devil and I remember her youth... and we smile. Ida |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Mmmm.. interesting poem, I liked the twist.. thanks for sharing this with me,smiles.. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you, Pantheress, I really know a person like this. In fact I've known more than one. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Ida, I'm smiling as well. A portrait that I have seen many a time ~ and you have painted it well.  As they say, "It's never too late!" lol Love you! Linda  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marchmadness - are you sure you weren't writing about my stepmother? Wow, this brought back memories for sure... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Ida, that has happened to so many people but as Linda said 'it is never to late'. You wrote it so well. Love Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, The truth never changes, and doesn't belong to anyone. It is always there. Bobby |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I think I have met this person .... a few times in my life. Well done. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ida, We have all met a lot of her kind in our lives and a lot of hims Also. We should all write a page.I bet the book will never end. LOL "late" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ida, even black sheep turn into white when they grow old. It's a funny process, that when this happens, they look for black sheep to point at ... You are such a good observer and I am happy that you share your real life sketches with us. Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ida... this is one of your best! lovely gifting here.. thank you .. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Ida, my friend, I have known many people like this. They were always so quick to judge. Never able to see their on bad deeds. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
excellent write, I personally see this so often...you have verbalized it so well |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The reformed are often the quickest to judge. *S* Well written... you touched a chord for many of us! |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Hm, are christians more likely to be so? a genuine thought. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Mmmm, yes, Ida, I know exactly what you mean. - Owl |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
wonderful poem!?! i loved it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This write here Marchmadness is touching!  ARCTIC WIND |
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