Open Poetry #43 |
Make the Magic |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
MAKE THE MAGIC 24 October 2007 Dare to wheel through azure skies, your wings sun-blessed, in joyous flight; let your emancipated spirit embrace all God’s creations now, and know in every choice are sacred implications. Wrap your soul in light, and cushion egg-shell truths that grow and sing the velvet eyes of God, who nurtures in you, the good, even as your every nanosecond is born. - Owl |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is a favorite! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, this is indeed magical and ethereal, dear Diana! Love, Margherita |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
..... owlsa .... your pen writes beautiful words Here I stand to Meditate magnificence of your writing I do not know why do I write to you you are magician with your writing accept my pass thank you |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Ericc, Margherita and Nourzihane for your lovely comments. This is actually an accrostic I wrote for my grandson's 17th birthday: D . . . . Y . . . . L . . . . A . . . . N . . . . I . . . . S . . . . S . . . . E . . . . V . . . . E . . . . N . . . . T . . . . E . . . . E . . . . N . . . . - Owl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oh my goodness, what a sweet gift! and the sentiments...deep! i'm keeping this one |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Heng. I am glad that you thought so and that you liked it so much. - Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (07-24-2008 01:01 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Simply beautiful, Diana! I need to learn how to celebrate every nanosecond m'self. What a concept! Loved this'n! and love you! (Happy Birthday Dylan) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks so much, Karen! I sorta do celebrate every nanosecond, except if I am not! (I have Irish blood, so I am allowed to say something like that! ) Thanks for the birthday wishes for Dylan. I will pass them on - giggles, but did you see his birthday was on 24 October? - Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
-Owl, lovely friend, This is beautiul and heart-touching. Love, Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Alison. I am glad you enjoyed it so much. - Owl |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
nice wordings but i will like it more if it was rhymed the same every other line |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I, on the other hand, don't like rhyme, unless it serves my purpose. - Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Not only a beautiful poem but so very clever as well. You are so talented, Diana. Ida |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Here lies the source of your own personal magic, and the magic within your poetry. with smiles Lynda |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ida for your extremely kind response and your magical one, Kin. You both make me feel very honoured and you have me blushing! - Owl |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Owl, your grandson is very lucky. What a precious gift on his Seventeen birthday. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you very much, Prasad, for your kind words. - Owl |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write Owl ARCTIC WIND |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Arctic Wind. Glad you did. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Happy belated birthday to your grandson Dylan! What a fantastic acrostic that you gifted him with! "in every choice are sacred implications" ~ Wise words from a wise owl. Love to you both! Linda |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Owl, The wording of your profound thoughts is wonderful and inspirational. Much enjoyed! I love this! to the library... ~miscellanea |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Linda. Thanks for finding it and me wise, and for the love to Dylan and me. Love to you for the light you bring. Thank you miscellanea. I am glad you saw my poem as deep and inspirational. Thank you for enjoying it so much. - Owl |
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