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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-11-26 12:58 PM






Within All The Above

Remember me wishing
On each star above
Remember me writing
In the name of love

Remember me thinking
As these words flow
Remember your songs
Each word I know

Remember me dancing
Neath a moonbeam
Remember the feelings
Fulfilling each dream

Remember me entering
Each place with you
Remember me glowing
In the love that grew

Remember me blending
Within all the above
Remember me sharing
With hope and love

Hope ©2008

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-11-26 03:44 PM


sometimes it is just way too difficult to describe how nice something really is...such is the case with this one...nice write, well spoken, enjoyed it all...
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-11-26 07:10 PM


Dear Hope, this poem emits such harmonious sounds. Beautifully written!

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-11-26 08:09 PM


HopeS - you write about beautiful memories...

BC

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2008-11-27 02:54 PM


'High' Hope!

~ Warm remembrances to be shared by both.

I seriously doubt that any man who was fortunate enough to have had a love like you in his life, would ever forget you.

Love 'n hugs,
Linda

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2008-11-28 10:54 PM



Dear Hope, you write the sweetest of poems
that really touch the heart strings, I loved it.  Love to you my friend.

Lindsay

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