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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-11-25 08:49 AM




On Me You Can Depend

Deep down you know
The friends who still care
Giving upmost support
They will always be there

We said friends forever
Long before you withdrew
Surely you must realise
The promise remains true

Know each passing day
I am always there for you
Offering a helping hand
As this is what friends do

Heartfelt prayers go out
Knowing in times of need
On me you can depend
In friendship I guaranteed

HopeĀ©2008


© Copyright 2008 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-11-25 09:28 AM


Yo dear HopeS,

This is well written, and I like the idea behind it.

Love Bobby

Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2008-11-25 10:12 AM


Thank you Hope for another great poem,smiles..
The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 493
EL, Michigan
3 posted 2008-11-25 12:45 PM


Amen HopeS. I dig this poem.

Jill

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2008-11-25 01:27 PM


Dear HopeS, this was friendship well described and something most people can related to, a good write my friend and true to many.
  
Rick

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-11-25 02:25 PM


love the character that is the basis for this uplifting write...thank you for sharing this...good to know that there are still folks like yourself in this world
Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
6 posted 2008-11-25 05:57 PM


You have a very loving and caring heart, Hope.
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