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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia 
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Everything We Feel Inside, We Can Say It With Our Eye's. Let No Word's Be Spoken, Or The Spell Might Be Broken, Come In Silence Leave The Same, Take The Memory Leave The Name, Know The Touch Will Always Burn, The Quite Heart Will Always Yearn, And Keep What Will Never Be Lost, For It Was Given Free Of Cost. Don't Speak Of It... Or Fantasies, Just Reflect And Close your Eye's, Believe It When you Need to Feel, And you Will Always Have Something Real. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the dokas (students of "the way") say that to close one's eyes and see, one much keep the open and just open his mind also..enjoyed the statement here |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The windows of the soul , Eyes can say so much Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your own beautiful eyes speak as expressively as your pen!  The "eyes" have it! lol  Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Pantheress - eyes can say a lot, even talk when one listens... BC |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Daphnejean... I like your beautiful thoughts.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce if I could write, half as good as you, how happy I would be,smiles..Thank you.. Mr Bill Charles Thank you for sharing thoughts with me, yes, the eyes speak more than many are able to see.. Earth Angel, I love you call sign, it suits the pieces that you write and spoke,smiles.. thank you for taking the time to reply to me.. It was great listening to you and the poem that you wrote.. Hi Hope you have a wonderful talent , I loved your thread of hope.. was so beautiful, thank you.. Dark Stranger "dokas" means student?.. "Know The Touch Will Always Burn", I'm sure you know what this poem is a reflection on,grins.. Open minds are not always easy to find,smiles.. So sometimes we need to read between the lines.. Or search the eyes,smiles.. Thanks you for your time.. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Pantheress, enjoyed your thoughts here and the picture that it painted in my mind, well done. Rick |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now I feel sooooo much better about the way I write. I usually close my eyes when I am writing a new poem on the keyboard / puter. I believe when you let the heart and soul see, then you find a much clearer path. Beautifully written and I enjoyed much . |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
I love your style! Love, hal |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Just me, back for another read of this well scripted poem.. it really is thought provoking Daphnejean and I hope others get a chance to read you ...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Awwww.. nourzihane that's so pretty, how did you do that,smiles.. I thank you for your kind words and wonderful pic.. Thanks Rick, this is one of my favourites too, but I'm biased,smiles.. Hi Hal, Ditto, I love your work to, Thanks for leaving me a response and sharing with me, it great.. Roniece Dawson-Bruce, To read me? sound wicked, but fun,chuckles.. Thanks Roniece for your constant support and encouragement, your wonderful.. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
I have long been fascinated with how sighted people interact visually. I do believe we are continously "broadcasting," without really meaning to, details about our fantasies and inner lives to others who can read the "Code." Quietly, wordlessly, as if by telepathic transfer, sends you what speech can not convey: A tender hug Friendship is for Life, if not Forever. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I liked the poem, but the capitalization of every word made me stumble a lot. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me Jaime, is great,smiles.. Hi Viking, I actually hadn't noticed I'd put so many capitals in till you pointed it out,smiles.. Then i had trouble reading it,grins.. good on ya,smiles.. and thanks for calling in,smiles.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Just Reflect And Close your Eye's, Believe It When you Need to Feel, And you Will Always Have Something Real." Interesting thoughts. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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