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Enlightenment (#2) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Enlightenment (#2) Enlightenment… is the late-Autumn moon in a nestling cloak of constellations, reflected by an ‘endless’ mountain lake (with a gently fallen trim of luminescent snow) in this broad and ancient forest of shadowy Deep-Time secrets and wintry splendor, that stirs the heart and shakes the consciousness, toward full awareness of Nature’s immense and fragile magnificence. --- b. e. adams (11/19/08) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And your words do this magnificence justice, dear Bruce. This is high class poetry. Just wonderful. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is superb, exquisite imagery and wonderful thoughts. Gaia smiles. |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
I appreciate your connection and expression. Hal |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, This paints a very bright scene. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bruce, I have an appreciation for ~ and an abiding admiration of ~ your "full awareness of Nature’s immense and fragile magnificence." and how you express that awareness so poetically!   Linda |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"in this broad and ancient forest" this line likes me, very much... thank you, Sir... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"Nature's immense and fragile magnificence." Always a pleasure, Poet. Ida |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Your descriptions are powerful, amazing and beautiful, thank you for sharing this with me,smiles.. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Amazing visuals in this one and just from reading it I can tell there is a deep respect for nature and her powers and beauty. I was able to travel to the valley where the lake was and view the magesty of the mountains in your words. Excellent and I liked the following the most.... -------------------------------------- in this broad and ancient forest of shadowy Deep-Time secrets and wintry splendor -------------------------------------- |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: ya think? |
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