»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #43
»
Empty
| Open Poetry #43 |
|
Empty |
|
|
amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Come smile away the while with me With raindrops and dew cascading Stay the moment of peaceful refrain And breath with me the day Hold my hand in tender care In silence we will ponder Let birds sing out in their rhyme And flowers thrust their color My heart won't faulter against What ever comes, what ever dares To steal our moment held so dear. I turn and you're not there... |
||
| © Copyright 2008 kat fer - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Ohh.. its sounds like a dream.. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for sharing.. |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is exquisite and poignant! I will keep it to read it again ... Love, Margherita |
||
WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Very much enjoyed this short and sweet poem, Well done. |
||
|
shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Beautiful expression! I enjoy your work. Thank you for commenting on my work. Love, Hal |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
amusemi - I sense the loniness within in these words. You have described it well... BC |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
