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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I can see Your eyes They’ve noticed I keep checking The watch Which in fact I rarely wear I am very Uncomfortable Of course With who it is You think you’re Speaking to . . . After all It’s been awhile The sun goes down On the lamp lit shore I can hear the ringing Of distant bells What’s the point Of talking about The good life We didn’t share And that was Only possible Because you Weren’t there . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, Go get-em tiger. I hate those things too. Bobby |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Kind of reminds me of that Doobie's song, "What a Fool Believes." Great write. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
John, This is a sad one Juju -Juju |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this. Acid, compact, and forceful. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks all This was pretty much a Harvey poem . . . Thanks again for reading and liking John . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, but there IS a point - in fact there are many points - this beautiful poem, for one - and working through the pain, for another, and coming out the other side in peace and gratitude for the dreams. - Owl |
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