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Lonesome for flowers
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Lonesome for flowers |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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A half circling moon and the sobriety of circumstance leave us in longing over the edge of the sill, rain makes love to the windows while I'm craving your rhythms in a storm painted rhapsody, where you'd mold me with contortions in calypso's ripe colors and the cirrus clouds blooming two on a torniquet knocking hard on the shutters while I'm lonesome for flowers and the willows are wilding |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
This is IMHO, one of your best writes ever, IG. Thoroughly enjoyed. Indigo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are a love goddess! There is no doubt about that! "the sobriety of circumstance leave us in longing" ~ I understand those lines only too well!  "while I'm craving your rhythms in a storm painted rhapsody, where you'd mold me with contortions in calypso's ripe colors"  Dang yer goood!   Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - very nice write. If you hear a knock on the door, it'll be the flowers you're waiting for, from me... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a radiant inkedgoddess, dear Michele. Enticing work! Love, Margherita |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yours is a style unique to you alone and your words are not only perfect in flow, but the the images can be felt when reading. The caress of rain on the windows is one that can mesmerize and you were flawless in it's representation. Excellent write. |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Beautiful work. Thanks for the inspiration. Hal |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful scenery created Michele!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you kindly for stopping by |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
inkedgoddess, I like this lots. You write and I read. I love your book too, by the way. It's been a pleasure to read and looks good on my shelf with Bobby's. A PS - Love the picture too. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wow Michelle .. this is wonderful! love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very beautiful! I know this feeling all too well. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful and i know just how you feel |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you've painted a beautiful picture here...a pleasure to read...thank you for sharing... |
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