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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2008-07-20 05:00 AM

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moon sighs touch the hearts

like love scented trails of light

inhaled in full trust

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2008-07-20 05:04 AM

Oooh, I'm still inhaling and sighing and gazing . . .

- Owl

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-07-20 06:04 AM

Margherita, Margherita, Margherita!! just beautiful!!!!!!! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2008-07-20 06:09 AM

whew!

nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

4 posted 2008-07-20 06:38 AM

...... dear margherita .....

How wonderful you are in your choice of images, but i'll withdraw so as not to Scratch it beauty i always stop at the point of beauty

accept my pass

thank you

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-07-20 10:02 AM

Yo Margherita,

Nice world you've got there Hon.

Bobby

Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

6 posted 2008-07-20 10:35 AM

A very visual and sensual haiku, beautifully done!

Lynda

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-07-20 01:43 PM

Margherita,

What a gentle and beautiful haiku by a gentle and beautiful woman.

Love,
A

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2008-07-20 02:00 PM

"inhaled in full trust"

Yes, dear Margherita, so much is known through the breath. Lovely picture and words!

Love
Helen

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2008-07-20 02:05 PM

What a beautiful photo and write!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2008-07-20 05:47 PM

Your words are a perfectly beautiful sigh, the moon
and the heart and trails of light are absolutely
gorgeous in their splendor.
"Trust" being the keyword, just so you know I didn't miss anything.

Really nice haiku, you~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2008-07-20 06:58 PM

Beautiful!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2008-07-21 12:35 PM

very nice

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2008-07-21 09:38 PM

Wonderful...James

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2008-07-22 03:30 PM

Margherita,
you have mastered many styles and they
capture love and beauty in every
phrase.

Love,
Eric

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

15 posted 2008-07-22 06:28 PM

Margherita, that moon is positively spell-binding!

The next full moon that I see, I will be listening to its sigh...

Love & Lunar Light,
Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2008-07-23 11:52 AM

I feel you all spoil me with your generous comments. Thank you my dear Poet friends.

Love,
Margherita

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