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fire flies |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
My flaming words are angry armed with sharpened pen upon a blackened canvas fire flies again Often I write softly tentative pastels flowing from a feathers edge tiptoeing on shells recounting in my pages countless blows I've took fighting with my phrases hiding in my book somber black or blinding white no genius to be found I thought my words were shouting but they barely made a sound |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hear this one very well, Peter and I really like what I'm hearing. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I can relate to this. Wonderful write, with emotional yet subdued imagery. Fire flies are totally cool, by the way. |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
Words are powerful and so are yours. |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
So beauitful you write.. I heard you shouting through.. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very much liked the phrasing and thoughts in this. I looked forward to reading more of your works and when read aloud this one flows smooth as silk as does it's message. Well done. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I find myself looking for your poetry. I am a fan - and you are very good. Thank you for sharing with us all. Alison |
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