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Open Poetry #43

Rivers.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-11-12 11:40 PM

I don't know who told you
but the birds told me
that no matter the what you think
rivers don't have to die at sea.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (11-13-2008 12:50 AM).]

Pantheress
Member

since 2008-11-02

Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2008-11-12 11:52 PM

Hey, that's great.. It made me chuckle,
Thanks for sharing this with me,smiles..

americangothic
Junior Member

since 2008-11-11

Posts 45

2 posted 2008-11-12 11:58 PM

interesting little verse

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-11-13 12:06 PM

Paul,

What you say is very true.

Some rivers die in lakes, and some die in rivers.  I'm trying to remember a poem, I think written by Carl Sandburg about rivers in Minneapolis, Minn.

I like your poem about rivers.  My Delaware River dies in Delaware Bay.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2008-11-13 12:44 PM

Thanks guys!

I live ten minutes east of minneapolis.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2008-11-13 03:16 AM

Interesting, Paul.
Ida

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2008-11-13 08:49 AM

Fanks Ida.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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