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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-11-12 11:27 AM


            Winter Dreams

Beyond the late-Autumn evening
  calm,
bare-broom trees sweep the sky
  of clouds
by a sudden frosty breeze
that catches the vibrant,
star-cloaked crescent moon
  in fine surprise,
sailing the infinite 'Deep-
  time' sea of Winter dreams.

       --- b. e. adams (11/12/08)


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-11-12 11:34 AM


M'dear Poet, with your poetry you have the ability to capture Mother Nature in all of her moods, beauty, and guises!

Simply beautiful!

Love & Nature Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2008-11-12 11:12 PM


Bruce,

I love the images of the bare-broom trees.  Perfection, my friend.

Alison

Pantheress
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3 posted 2008-11-12 11:27 PM


Love your call sign and love your poems..
Thanks for sharing this with me..

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-11-13 03:05 AM


"Bare broom trees sweep the sky of clouds."
Truly fine use or words here.
                                    Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-11-13 04:05 AM


*sigh* beautiful Bruce!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-11-13 09:43 AM


star-cloaked crescent moon
  in fine surprise


Ohhh, I could linger in your magical vision for a long time ...

Fabulous!

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2008-11-13 05:24 PM


Your writing touches my heart with your wonder of nature. Thank you.

ooxx  Marti

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8 posted 2008-11-13 06:44 PM


loved it
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