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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Pop The salmon Are running And the Calumet River Is miraculously clear You can see them go by Just cast in your line This is Heaven The peace you earned The big ones Are all for you . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is a very sensitive and touching write. It brings back memories of my Grandfather. Bobby |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
The grunter are on the bit here,smiles.. This is a great poem.. Thanks for sharing.. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hope Pop catches "the big one" Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Heaven indeed! This one really put a smile on my face!   EA |
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