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Winter's Void
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Winter's Void |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Winter's Void Late Autumn leaves and mist dance in spiraling wisps (by the tune of a frosty wind) onto this river of lost Summer dreams and memories of Spring, flowing forever... into Winter's void. --- b. e. adams (11/11/08) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (11-11-2008 05:54 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Late Autumn leaves and mist dance in spiralling wisps.................." This is a very lovely seasonal write! ~ beautiful indeed..  ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, November sure brings some melancholic tunes onto these pages. And you are a Master in rendering this melancholy. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, Winter brings snowmen, sleding, and countless snowball battles. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When one is feeling down, the bleakness of an impending winter can add to those feelings. However, the converse is also true. If one is in a happy state, one can look forward to the pristine beauty of winter and all the joyful possibilities. I can empathize and appreciate your melancholy poem, for I felt that way once during a difficult time in my life.  Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You make even depression sound beautiful, Poet. Ida |
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