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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-11-11 04:05 PM


        Winter's Void

Late Autumn leaves and mist
dance in spiraling wisps
(by the tune of a frosty
   wind)
onto this river of lost
  Summer dreams and
memories of Spring,
flowing forever...
into Winter's void.

       --- b. e. adams (11/11/08)

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-11-11 04:08 PM



Late Autumn leaves and mist
dance in spiralling wisps.................."

This is a very lovely seasonal write! ~ beautiful indeed..


ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-11-11 06:25 PM


Oh my, November sure brings some melancholic tunes onto these pages.

And you are a Master in rendering this melancholy.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita  

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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3 posted 2008-11-11 10:50 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

Winter brings snowmen, sleding, and countless snowball battles.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-11-12 12:52 PM


When one is feeling down, the bleakness of an impending winter can add to those feelings.
However, the converse is also true. If one is
in a happy state, one can look forward to the pristine beauty of winter and all the joyful possibilities.

I can empathize and appreciate your melancholy poem, for I felt that way
once during a difficult time in my life.


Linda

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-11-12 02:01 AM


You make even depression sound beautiful, Poet.
                              Ida

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