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HopeS
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0 posted 2008-11-11 10:16 AM





In Heartprints For You

Its feelings from my heart
Which I need to write
Worded tokens I convey
Both in love and light

Words written in sincerity
With continuous flow
Hoping to keep in touch
The only way I know

Each poem of love written
I send on over to you
As we are oceans apart
This is all I could do

As with every word I write
The feelings are true
Love flows continuously
In heartprints for you

HopeĀ©2008


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americangothic
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1 posted 2008-11-11 11:38 AM


your emotions come through well in this piece...I enjoyed it
HopeS
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2 posted 2008-11-12 07:47 AM


Thank you for your kind reply , yes writing  becomes an emotional outlet
Hope

EagleOne
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3 posted 2008-11-12 07:21 PM


There is nothing more touching than words from the heart!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

LindsayP
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4 posted 2008-11-12 08:12 PM



Great poem Hope, as usual, so much enjoyed.

Love Lindsay

Pantheress
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5 posted 2008-11-12 08:25 PM


That's so well worded and sends a clear message of love.. Thanks for sharing..
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6 posted 2008-11-14 02:56 AM


Heartprints straight from the heart.
You worded it very well.

Thank you for sharing.


Theresia

Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2008-11-14 03:53 PM


I do believe you have tattooed your heart on your sleeve and the coloring is wonderful.  Enjoyed very much.
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