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Sharon Rose
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0 posted 2008-11-10 07:49 PM



THERE WAS A MAN WITH NO FACE, PASSED MY DOOR LAST NIGHT.
GIVEN NO SHAPE OR COLOR , NO EYES TO HAVE SIGHT
NO MOUTH NOR LIPS TO MAKE NOT A SOUND. NO SMILE OR EXPRESSION NOT EVEN A FROWN.
ONLY A SHAPE A OUTLINE TO SEE. DARK AS THE NIGHT. WHO COULD HE BE? EACH STEP THAT I TAKE HE TAKES ONE WITH ME.
I THINK HE HAS DISAPPEARED OUT OF MY VIEW.WHO IS THIS MAN? I HAVEN'T A CLUE.
THE DAWN NOW IS BREAKING AND LIGHT GLIMMERS IN. I WONDER IF TOMORROW NIGHT, WILL HE COME AGAIN.

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2008-11-10 10:57 PM


Sharon Rose - nice write about the shadow.

BC

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2 posted 2008-11-11 01:35 AM


I have a similar person who follows me.   Welcome to Passions, I know you will enjoy it here.

        

Pantheress
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3 posted 2008-11-11 07:58 AM


I like your poem.. Thanks for sharing..
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-11-12 01:22 PM


Did he ever appear again? ~ I hope he wasn't the Boogey Man! ~ just your shadow or a friendly spirit!

Greetings Rose! Welcome to these pages of blue ~ the home of kindred spirit poets!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel



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5 posted 2008-11-13 12:14 PM


Sharon,

Welcome to PiP.  May you enjoy yourself here and post many poems for all to enjoy.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-11-13 04:04 AM


Welcome to our pages blue.. this was a lovely gifting here.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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