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Driftwood Lives |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Driftwood Lives Under a stirring deep-azure sky of grey-ship clouds forever passing by, 'Life' drifts into Winter like measured music on an Autumn breeze from some farther shore, in a half-forgotten dream of youth and hope and loves... forever lost. ---b.e. adams 11/10/08 [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (11-10-2008 10:58 AM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
great moment of melancholy which whispers artfully... thank you for the beautiful poem. yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You write melancholy better than anyone I know, Bruce. As your words pull the heart strings they make such beautiful music that I begin to forget I often feel this way myself. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Under a stirring deep-azure sky of grey-ship clouds forever passing by,..................." Bruce, you have a REALLY good pen when it comes to writing scenery poems and describing the beautiful imagery!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - I don't know how much more I can add to these replies that hasn't been said, great write... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~ in a sighing mood~~ to your words M |
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