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Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

0 posted 2008-07-19 01:12 PM

I’m addicted to this high
that floats my mind
upon a sea of soul.
I wade through thoughts
in hypnotizing ripples
finding echo in my blood
to flood some crazed theme
in schemes none can suspect.
For I alone within this
mara-thought of muse
rue and fear what’s left behind
upon the dock of deference,
reference to what’s framed
and stored, unused
abused and lost
forever. Give me pain,
that driving fuel, that feeds
and seeds the power
of creation. Draw me,
paint me, sing me, write me,
send me skimming over waves
to dip my staves in passions’ waters.
For all the agony of apprehension,
inspired Invention of the image
the song,
the writ,
will buoy me
to the next.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-07-19 01:20 PM

Methinks your talented Muse will fit in perfectly with pipTalk's "Family of Friends". I thoroughly enjoyed your debut poem!

Giving both of you a warm, welcoming pip hug
~ from a fellow Ontarian!

Earth Angel

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2008-07-19 01:56 PM

Enjoyed your poem immensely, Lynda. I particularly liked the run-on rhymes that enhanced the flow initiated by "wading" in the title.

- Owl

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

3 posted 2008-07-19 02:27 PM

Thank you so much for the welcome Earth Angel! I am hoping to jump start my writing again. The last poetry site I was with, is now fading away and I want to rub elbows and poems with people who are passionate about their poetry.
You are very encouraging.
And from Ontario!!! home sweet home! hehe...

thanks again.

And Diana, my new friend!!!! We are kindred spirits are we not! Thanks again for all your support, both in emails and replys!

with smiles
Lynda (Gaelynsgirl)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2008-07-19 09:09 PM

Welcome to Passions! This is an enjoyable read on many levels, intellectually, emotionally and artistically. I look forward to more from your quill.

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

5 posted 2008-07-19 09:35 PM

Hi Midnitesun,

Thank you for the generous reply. I'm looking forward to reading and learning from the poetry of the many gifted people on this site.
with smiles
Lynda

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2008-07-20 01:54 AM

Lynda~
Welcome to the wonderful world of PiP~

'I wade through thoughts
in hypnotizing ripples'

I like that thought very much~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

7 posted 2008-07-20 02:07 AM

Thank you Marge. We do love the potential of words, don't we! I am so looking forward to rich and rewarding relationships with the poets of pip.
with smiles
Lynda

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2008-07-20 03:16 AM

Kindred spirit, Lynda, it is my pleasure. You will find that this is a poetry site you will never want to leave - not only is there beautiful poetry, but beautiful hearts too.

We celebrate your joining us.

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2008-07-20 03:57 AM

quote:
I’m addicted to this high
that floats my mind
upon a sea of soul.

Many enticing poetic lines. The above quoted could stand alone and still remain strongly impressed upon the reader's mind.

I welcome you to Pipland, dear Lynda.

Love,
Margherita

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

10 posted 2008-07-20 04:19 AM

Thank you Diana and Margherita,
I'm sleepless in Ontario this nite. It's good to know there are friends awake with me.
Lynda

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

11 posted 2008-07-20 04:31 AM

Hey, you aren't allowed to be sleepless in Ontario - only Seattle.

It isn't night here (South Africa) and I think that Italy (where Margherita is) is on the same line of longitude or near it, so it won't be night there either, but that means that we are awake with you all the more.

Now, lie back, relax your toes, then each muscle all the way up to your nose (especially your shoulders), then your eyelids and waft on those waves of poetry you created and smile a little smile . . . and f-a-l-l . . . a-s-l-e-e-p . . . there you go . . . (you're allowed to dream up another poem while you sleep)

- Owl

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

12 posted 2008-07-20 04:41 AM

hahaha.... thanks kin,

The robins will be waking with the crows close behind soon. I'll send you another poem.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

13 posted 2008-07-20 04:50 AM

Hey, kin - sleep first - then send the poem.

- Owl

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

14 posted 2008-07-20 11:24 AM

"For all the agony of apprehension,
inspired Invention of the image
the song,
the writ,
will buoy me
to the next.

So true!

Welcome to PiP.

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

15 posted 2008-07-20 11:44 AM

Thankyou for your understanding and your welcome! It means a lot coming from a peer.

with smiles
Lynda

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2008-07-20 02:16 PM

Gaelynsgirl

Welcome to Passions in Poetry, where you will indeed rub elbows with over 10,000 happy members...

we've been a family of friends for over 9 years now...and we keep growing, so hopefully you'll never find this website fading away...

Please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

17 posted 2008-07-20 03:46 PM

Thank you again! I am really impressed with pip. It is no wonder that it thrives.
Supported by good people and good poetry, and good support, how could it not!

in appreciation,
Lynda

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

18 posted 2008-07-21 01:57 PM

I am enjoying your poetry very much, Linda.
Glad you joined us.
Ida

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

19 posted 2008-07-21 04:00 PM

Thank you so much Ida,

I went digging through your archive and my fav is 'Same Old Story'! Thoroughly enjoyed that thoughtful verse!

Lynda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

20 posted 2008-07-21 09:39 PM

Indeed your Muse will do wonders with your talent!

ARCTIC WIND

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

21 posted 2008-07-22 01:27 AM

Thank you AW... when encouraged by support like yours.

Lynda

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

22 posted 2008-07-22 01:29 AM

Welcome to PIP Linda and I can see by your writing that you are quite a talent. I look

forward to reading many more of your poems.
Take care dear lady.

Lindsay

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

23 posted 2008-07-22 08:51 AM

Thank you Lindsay! Talent is a coin whose only value is realized when spent. Looking at your poetry archive, you know the meaning of the word and its more valuable companion, a good work ethic!
I love this from 'Visions of the Outback'

'The outback spawns a strange romance,
Where the lightning’s flash is a devil’s dance'

NOw that's a place I could live!

with smiles
Lynda

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