Open Poetry #43 |
Bone's Razor |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones has a straight razor in his pocket. He keeps it there just in case he ever runs across the guy that first did him when he was a kid. Bobby |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Somebody else probably already took him out. Hope Bones can refocus on something more doable and more rewarding. Striking read! Bridget |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Bridget, For the kind words on this poem. I hope someone has taken him out. Bones probably wouldn't recognize the guy, it's been so many years ago. Love Bobby |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Quote " the guy that first did him when he was a kid " this implies a sexual act was committed. Why would anyone carry a razor if not to harm someone else? Anyway what is done is done...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul Wilson, Exactly. Thanks for reading and commenting. That reminds me, I want to sharpen my knife. I like to be able to shave with it. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (11-25-2008 09:29 AM).] |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Good poem. And on the knife, and being able to shave with it... Good man, Rob-bob. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks very much Paul, For the kind words on the poem, and on my knife. I've always had a knife fetish. I have a collection of woodcarving chisels. I keep those sharp too. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Shaving is a very clever way of avoiding censorship. Education is great no matter where it comes from. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, It's always nice to avoid censorship. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love Bobby |
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