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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2008-11-05 12:47 PM

the collapse of the ring upon her finger
leaves a mark on his aching soul
and the shadows of a setting sun
lengthen the longing of his pain

weeping whets the heart-honed stone
like a smithy's edge on heat-bent steel
and the cold hardens the hot-iron edge
as waters forlorn face the current's stream

his thoughts drift like a sun-drenched limb
as feelings flirt with a distant shore
past his past in a reverie unsought
of echos and memories of love-spent times

when the touch of her caress like a morning's mist
lasted longer than a daisy in the sun's warmth kissed

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-11-05 02:59 AM

quote:
his thoughts drift like a sun-drenched limb
as feelings flirt with a distant shore
past his past in a reverie unsought
of echos and memories of love-spent times

when the touch of her caress like a morning's mist
lasted longer than a daisy in the sun's warmth kissed

Wonderful romantic write, dear Steaven. Puts me in a mood of reverie.

Love,
Margheirta

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-11-05 05:35 AM

*sigh* lovely *sigh* so beautiful Steaven!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2008-11-05 08:35 AM

Nice...great rhythm and sentiment.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-11-06 02:19 AM

Steaven,

I needed this beauty tonight, but it was sad too.

Alison

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2008-11-06 03:58 AM

reminiscing with those memories returning , so touching and heartfelt , I could sense your heart yearning

Hope

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2008-11-06 06:24 AM

"past his past" in a reverie unsought
of echos and memories of love-spent times...

funny thing Steven, I hadn't read this until after my latest response on my poem of Into Tomorrow's When...

Enjoyed your words
M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2008-11-08 06:35 AM

Love's touch echoes far beyond any other emotion. Especially memorable, when unsought feelings arise and crest across the shores of our undying affection.

Tenderly honest.

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