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Luis, my love
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Luis, my love |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america 
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i have known 1000 blades but yours is the one that pierced my heart, i have known 1000 thunderstorms but yours is the on that drowns my sorrows, i have known 1000 sunsets but yours is the one that i want to see everyday, i have known 1000 voices but yours is the one that i never want to stop hearing, i have known 1000 smiles but yours are the ones that make my heart beating stop, i have known 1000 frowns but your are the ones that crush my spirit, i have known 1000 hands but your are the onest that touch me the most, i have known 1000 eyes but yours are the ones that i could get lost in forever, i have known 1000 tears but your are the ones i cant stand to see you shed, i have known 1000 teeter totters but yours is the one that wont let me off, i have known 1000 heart aches but yours is the one i never want to feel, i have known 1000 arms but yours are the ones i want to melt into forever, i have known 1000 people but you, my love, are the only one i never want to lose |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
kanashe - nice write... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting write (in form, especially) but such a quality mix of longing and love...thank you for sharing |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
thank you guys for the comments <3 -ashe |
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