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kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
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0 posted 2008-11-03 04:52 PM


i have known 1000 blades but yours is the one that pierced my heart,
i have known 1000 thunderstorms but yours is the on that drowns my sorrows,
i have known 1000 sunsets but yours is the one that i want to see everyday,
i have known 1000 voices but yours is the one that i never want to stop hearing,
i have known 1000 smiles but yours are the ones that make my heart beating stop,
i have known 1000 frowns but your are the ones that crush my spirit,
i have known 1000 hands but your are the onest that touch me the most,
i have known 1000 eyes but yours are the ones that i could get lost in forever,
i have known 1000 tears but your are the ones i cant stand to see you shed,
i have known 1000 teeter totters but yours is the one that wont let me off,
i have known 1000 heart aches but yours is the one i never want to feel,
i have known 1000 arms but yours are the ones i want to melt into forever,
i have known 1000 people but you, my love, are the only one i never want to lose


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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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1 posted 2008-11-03 08:30 PM


kanashe - nice write...

BC

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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2 posted 2008-11-03 08:53 PM


interesting write (in form, especially) but such a quality mix of longing and love...thank you for sharing
kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america
3 posted 2008-11-04 10:50 AM


thank you guys for the comments <3

-ashe

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