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Isolation Blue
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Isolation Blue |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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In a distant world of darkness far from the home town girl in the midst of foreign oceans there's a lonely soldier's world where the pen of love stops talking when a promise turns untrue and far away there's isolation blue Chorus: Memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in pockets full of truth dreams inked on promise after action a river of words in isolation blue There's night skies lacking moonlight when a lover loses face and a soldier can get buried in the dirt inside his veins and the chapters of defeat are written with ancient rules and far away there's isolation blue. There's a lover's fire an old desire a distant fading flame where wayward winds keep blowing cross an icy memory lane and the brightest leaves of Autumn become colors of the truth and far away there's isolation blue. Memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in pockets full of truth dreams inked on promise after action a river of words in isolation blue. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Memoirs of pages filled with passion tear stained letters in pockets full of truth dreams inked on promise after action a river of words in isolation blue" these are powerful words and serve to make this an exquisitely intrigueing write...definitely will be reading this one again and again |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
It's been awhile since I've seen you post~ Good your back! Enjoyed the Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent work, good sir  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - nice to read your writings again. Great words for the song... BC |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that is a song that is right for our times I would say, that was loverly m'friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Learning you're no longer loved is devastating even when you have the luxury of going home to cry and scream... To lose what matters most when you're already in hell is so much worse. Beautiful, poignant work!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Superb words as always sir and I can even hear your guitar in the background as I read. It has been far too long since I have been able to enjoy your songs but always worth the wait and always worth the visit. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to all for the kind replies and well wishes. It's good to be back! Eric |
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