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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-11-01 12:48 PM



soft embrace by ether's breeze
longing's touch in calm caress
soothes the soul in silent love
by volumes filled through hearts at rest

with quiet lack of conciousness
the soul in lonely vissitude
by cautions cast in future's face
and simple thoughts as platitudes

searching life by thoughts deemed wise
of means and ways and finding there
escapes and shades of dream-mists cast
like shore-line waves, as wafts in air

latent grows the scene so swift
as time moves through the shallow glass
like fleeting mem'ries yet unthought
as steam-filled meadows not to last

slips through fingers of the mind
hand-held hopes of another kind
soft embrace by ether's breeze
ne'er to keep, ne'er to please



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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2008-11-01 03:37 PM


Patiently, the heart speaks, the heart hears... lovely backdrop for the soul ...
ah, but to wait for winter is to put off until spring...and then it's fishing season!
This was a lovely escape.  I'm keeping it to indulge again and again.

Janette
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2 posted 2008-11-02 10:06 AM


"escapes and shades of dream-mists cast"

"soft embrace by ether's breeze"


Igniting the mind to reach the upper regions of space.  Yes, that is what your writing often does for me.  Challenging but very satisfying.

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

steavenr
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3 posted 2008-11-03 04:05 PM


TD,
fishing season? [smiling] thanks for choosing to look at this more than once

Janette,
you got it...appreciate the dead-on comments

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