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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-10-29 10:44 PM

Loving Her Smile

Oh yes
I've been to
Pali Lookout before
but never with the
woman that I adore.

See the way her hair
caresses the breeze.
She how her skirt
blows above her knees.

Thank goodness that my
darling is finally here.
I love her smile,
I love to have
her near.

JamesLee
28October
2008

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2008-10-29 11:59 PM

Oh this is glorious, James Michael~

It eludes to love on the beach, or in a little grass shack!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-10-30 06:30 AM

James...I'm smiling for you too!

lovely gifting here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2008-10-30 10:41 AM

Seen through fresh eyes always makes the ordinary extraordinary, especially the eyes of a loved one. Very romantic.

Enjoyed.

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-10-30 05:27 PM

I enjoy your love poems. always true.

regards

yann

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2008-10-30 05:35 PM

The visual of her hair caressing the breeze is poetic itself and does much justice to your write. As always, you wear it on your sleeve well.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-11-01 12:04 PM

Thank you Blues Serenade, Roniece, Janette, 2islander2 and Mark for the wonderful responses...James

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2008-11-01 11:40 AM

James darling man, this is gorgeous. Why is it, do you suppose, that when I read your words I can see your smile? Simply special, your writing rocks.

I shouldn't be reading delight really, already I am way behind on my essays, but your name always makes me stop and read. And what is more it is always worthwhile. Loved it utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2008-11-01 12:33 PM

sounds like paradise has come to you...nice write

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