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Satin Trace
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Satin Trace |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Satin Trace Weary of the pause Miles of ribbon road billow behind me One beat empty of anything One beat empty of everything Swept from my lungs The air electric with your smile One breath taken in homily One breath given to destiny Stunned to silence Frozen landscapes wait for snow flakes One beat, one breath Each a celebration of life Lived well Copyright Kkh 10/29/08 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is one you can read, lean back, and sigh a sigh of comfort...nice write...loved the couplets, the form, the style--not to mention the message |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"One breath taken in homily" I adore of your use of homily, an inspirational catchphrase, such a fun word which works perfectly in this piece. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Inspirational Penning Indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice as always and I can visualize the trace of satin ribbon in the rear view mirror gliding over the landscape with each new mile. Much enjoyed |
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