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the Siren's call
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the Siren's call |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now 
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the Siren's call the Siren's call of temptation vocalizes untamed pursuit an all encompassing presence intently irresistible uplifting her chosen victim by embedding his every pore her alluring appearance temps with glimpses of beautiful flesh she conquers seduction quickly using instinctive amusements degrees of the physical world removed from human traditions the Siren stimulates a man promising endless adventures making him thirst for more unions while instilling a ripe spirit increasing his wild compulsion to possess her at any cost Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/siren-song/ . |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Interesting write, Janette. Maybe we all have a bit of that Siren's call in us which perhaps just manifests in different ways. Enjoyed your words. Helen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I believe I have heard this call before and you describe it well. I especially liked the opening ---------------------------- the Siren's call of temptation vocalizes untamed pursuit ----------------------------- |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
THANK YOU FOR RESPONDING: Huan Yi - That was an interesting site you left for me to check out, thanks. Years ago I was fascinated learning that the legendary Sirens were creatures with the head of a female and the body of a bird. <--very odd! Thus going to that web-site and reading that other Siren poem did humor me. Hahaha! Helen - I agree ... often in the pursuit ... no holds are barred. *wink* Mark - Ah! So you know it? I am glad that I got it right. *wink wink* always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Yes I also agree..that we all have a little "Siren" in us  The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ceinwyn - Indeed. Striving for ... irresistible attraction ... is hard to resist. *wink* Thank you for responding. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've not lost your touch, m'friend. Welcome home! We've missed you! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ouu! I love this one~ Wonderful Write~  ARCTIC WIND |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Sunshine - thank you for remembering me, and especially for your warm, welcomed support. Artic Wind - ouu! Thanks for your comment. You have made me smile. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
good to see this one and looking forward to more...excellent write...completely enjoyed |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
beauty.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well now...I thought I'd replied. Sheesh. but yes, to your hooking opening lines--handled diplomatically and true. and smiling at John's Margaret Atwood link too, an appropriate companion to this beautiful link of ink. (can I be your groupie?) *chuckling* much enjoyed |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
steavenr - I am glad you saw this one, and appreciate the read. Dark Star - Oh! I am flattered! Thank you. serenity - thank you for coming back to leave me this fun reply. And YES ... of course you can ... and I am *chuckling,* too. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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