Open Poetry #43 |
All Hallow's Eve |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
All Hallow’s Eve by Linda L. Dowd Rolling in with mists and fog banks, legions rise from crypts and graves. On this eve of Darkness hallowed, evil spews from hadean caves. From vilest depths of degradation, skirling screams in endless dire. They rise from odious bowels of evil, where demons dwell in Devil's Fire. Woeful souls rove halls unholy, they squeal and shriek in hellish home. Their evil deeds cast them to Hades, where forever they will roam. There's no redemption for the wicked, they chose the path away from God. Heinous acts spun karmic wheel, now roads of brimstone they do trod. Rolling in with mists and fog banks, legions rise from crypts and graves, On this eve of Darkness hallowed, evil spews from hadean caves. ~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-27-2008 06:16 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow, Linda. I just wanna trick-or treat. Good writing though. Ida |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I have to break out my night light tonight! Seriously, the picture gives me the creeps. This reminds me of my friend's Uncles hotel. It is haunted by James Buchanan, yeah the 15th president. I didn't know about him until I met my friend. My mom's boyfriend said he's probably haunting the place because he wants attention Uhh when I went to take a shower, my socks were like near the shower and when I stepped out of the bathroom they were outside of the door. Apparently, he's a tidy ghost! Oh and he likes to open doors too! My friend's Mom's door was opened right in front of them while they were talking. Spppoooky!! Needless to say I didn't leave my friend's side during my visit. Lots of hugs & love to you, Tink The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Ida, there is only tricking in this graveyard! ~ No treats to be found there. Sure is a helluvva spooky place! Sending a Halloweenie protective hug your way! ~ and some Halloweenie candy from my hallowed home! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ceinwyn ~ What a spine-tingly story! Thank you for sharing that! I have had many an experience myself with the supernatural/paranormal. Shiver me timbers! Literally! Beware of things that go bump in the night! BOO!!! Love 'n Halloween Hugs, Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
From vilest depths of degradation, skirling screams in endless dire. They rise from odious bowels of evil, where demons dwell in Devil's Fire. Dear Poetess, that poem is written with perfect rhyming in a most descriptive way. If I could only write poetry like that. Take a bow you brilliant poet. Love you dear Linda. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda, Linda, I know where is the Hadean caves, yikes!!! No way will I take that shortcut again, b''rrrrrrrrr. BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
spooky...just spooky...you've captured the atmosphere of Halloween so well |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
So perfect for the season. Take a bow, you have charmed the masses once again. Well done...and I second Lindsay...I wish I could write like you!! k |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
I felt the darkness leave your poem and seep into my mind! Great job. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Spooky indeed! I was expecting a witch with a green face to appear. Well done and love the new pic Linda Lou. Heart hugs~Nancy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
LindsayP ~ It would appear that we belong to a mutual admiration society! lol Right back atchya, Aussie Man! You are very kind and sweet ~ talented! Thank you, LP, my cheeks are flaming pink ~ and I like that! ~ No need to put rouge on my 'cherubic' cheeks! lol Love to you as well, my friend! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ Avoiding those hadean caves is a very good idea! Not even this 'angel' could protect you from the evil there that lies in await! Within those caves lie the portals that lead straight into the hellfires! Boo! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
steaven ~ "Spooky" times call for spooky measures! ~ and they be not for the faint of heart. Avoid graveyards on All Hallow's Eve ~ especially when the fog rolls in... Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
amusemi ~ What a pleasant surprise! So good to hear from you! You've been missed! Please do be careful, Dearie! It's not the best time of year to be leaving the safety of your home! Bolt all the windows and doors! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Newpoet ~ Darkness begone! I cannot have a new poet having darkness seeping into their mind! Love & LIGHT EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchanting One ~ Nancy, as you can see, I did get into the spirit of the season! hehehe What's a Halloween without your bewitching presence! Thanks for 'flying' by! hugs to you 2, Linda Lou |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have portrayed the spirit and feeling of the season quite well with this one. Great writing. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is a wonderful halloween poem. You can write about anything. |
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TRACE2RYM Junior Member
since 2008-10-09
Posts 38 |
This was great. I like the seasonaly spooky stuff. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
There's no redemption for the wicked, they chose the path away from God. Heinous acts spun karmic wheel, now roads of brimstone they do trod. No redemption at all FOllowing your path of light and love is the way. Have a happy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mark ~ I like the sound of your last name. It would go well with my daughter Shannon's name. lol The poet in me loves to rhyme names! So please forgive me if I ever inadvertantly call you Shannon! Thank you for reading my poem and for leaving such a nice comment! Happy Halloweenie Hug, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oklahoma Rose ~ Merci! I just write as the 'spirit' moves me! And there are lots of spirits lurking about at this time of year! hehehe HHH (Happy Halloween Hug) Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TRACE ~ I'm delighted that you like the spook from this kook! 'Tis the season! HHH (Happy Halloween Hug) EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess the Poetess ~ Congrats again on the publication of your book of poetry! I ordered it from Amazon and eagerly await its arrival!!! I appreciate your warm response to my poem, Michele! Thank you! Love & Light Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EA! What a spooky Halloween write!~ I really like this one, I am going to save this one! ARCTIC WIND |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My granddaughter Tori said - "Wow that was neat!" ((^*)) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
*shiver* And here I thought Halloween's evil resided in my nephew's bag of oh-so-tempting chocolate treats! *G* Excellent write, my friend... I thoroughly enjoyed... even if the hair is still standing up on my arms. *G* *shiver* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Artic Wind ~ I love your enthusiasm for all of the festive times of the year. Your poems are delightful. I'm pleased that you found mine worthy of saving! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mysteria ~ Hi, Sharon! Thank you for sharing what Tori said! I think that was kinda "neat" of her to say!!! Sending a "Thank you" to her ~ and a belated Happy Halloweenie Hug! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
suthern ~ A shiverin' suthern! Well, Sweetie, that's perfect! ~ I likes me 'Suthern' Comforts, shaken ~ not stirred! hehehe Bottoms up! cackle cackle Witchy Woman |
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